Deaths Hand: Chapter 2


The sergeant lay on the ground. His left arm shattered, and multiple puncture wounds in both. Bone fragment and blood leaked onto the asphalt. Dark crimson pools formed under his arms.

‘Why?’ he thought, as the pain became more than he could handle.

Suddenly a shot rang out. The beasts body seemed to explode right above its chest. Blood spattered onto the sergeants face. He started to feel a sense of hope.

Again and again its body sprung holes as bullets penetrated its putrid flesh. It held up its right hand like it was blocking some bright light, when a bullet whizzed by and took its middle finger with it. It’s face seemed to explode as a bullet entered its head and again exit just above it’s left eye.

It was jack, the sergeant figured, opening fire with the Squad Automatic Weapon.

Tracer, and the sound of gunfire filled the crossroads. The tracer disappeared into the creatures chest, then re-appeared as it came out it’s back. This was one of the weirdest things the sergeant could remember seeing. He thought that it looked like extremely fast fireflies buzzing directly at, through and out the back of this… thing.

The fire from Jack didn’t let up until the creature finally fell onto the sergeant limp. Blood and brain matter began pooling on the sergeants chest, and neck.

It was at this moment the sergeant caught his first smell of the beast. It smelled like rotting meat and eggs, which came from its flesh and it’s hair.

Then the sergeant saw it. It’s head, which was split apart from the crown of its head to its neck started slowly healing itself. New flesh was filling the gaps, while its brain started re-forming itself and slowly it’s face began closing the gap.

Bell arrived at the sergeant first and started to pull its foot claws out of his arms. His left arm moved strangely as he removed the last claw, and he noticed it was bent in the middle of the upper arm. Bell knew then it was broken.

“Sarge, your arms broke. This thing did a number on you sarge.” bell said as he reached for the beasts arm.

“Just get this damn thing off of me, goddamn it! Lets get the fuck out of here!” The sergeant yelled as air finally returned to his lungs.

Burch helped the sergeant to his feet, and was assisting him toward the guard shack with Bell.

A rustle behind them made all three come to a sudden stop in their tracks. Slowly all three turned their heads to see the origin of the noise.

The creature stood, it’s back toward them. It grabbed the hem of its leather overcoat and pulled it tight.

Then it turned.

It’s face was still closing the gory hole that had split it’s head into two. Then it was done, it looked as if nothing had happened to it.

“Holy sh…” Bell snapped, but could not finish. The beast sprung into the air filling the gap between them, kicking Bell in the cheek. The sound of bone breaking filled the air between the alleys. Knocked unconscious he fell to the ground like a rag doll.

In the same moment it’s left arm swung around, hitting Burch in the face with his claws, tearing muscle and tendons. His jaw came completely off of his face, spattering the sergeant’s face with new blood and saliva. The gaping hole dripped with gore and mucus. He fell to the street grasping where his lower mandible was once attached. Blood poured from between his fingers, as his tung made a kind of macabre dance in the air.

Jack and John stood helpless. The sergeant took a step backwards, tripping on a curb, landing on his butt.

The creatures eyes seemed to flash as it looked at John and Jack. It then turned its attention back to the sergeant. It’s jaws seemed to unhinge as it bent over towards the sarge. It’s mouth was growing twice its normal size. It made contact with the sergeants neck, as he started to scream and beat at it’s face with his right hand.

It bit down on his neck with a ripping sound. Piercing the carotid artery showering it’s face with fresh blood. The blood also fell like a crimson rain onto the street, and sidewalk. A suckling noise arose from it’s mouth.

The Iraqi man had not moved from his position. He uttered prayers to Allah, while fingering the beads in his fingers. His eyes shone from the sheer size of them, reflecting the light from the single bug encrusted streetlight in the road.

The sergeant went limp in it’s grasp. It released its mouth from his neck, showing the tremendously large wound. Half of his neck was missing. Bone and cartilage protruded from the flesh. His trachea was exposed, and quivered in his death pangs.

Flesh hung from the creatures fangs, dangling as he turned his face to look at the other two on the ground. It ignored Burch, still writhing in pain, and turned it’s attention to Bell, who was just shaking the darkness from his eyes. Recovering fully only to see the shining eyes of the beast mere inches from his face.

Bell screamed.

The scream became muffled as the creature covered his face with it’s mouth. A slow crunching noise, like that of a dog breaking a bone in it’s mouth, permeated the air as it’s teeth broke through his skull and jaw bone. The scream abruptly ended.

When the creatures mouth finally closed and it turned it’s head toward Jack and John, the body that had once been Bell  fell onto the ground. Where his face had once been turned toward the two. The gaping hole, covering his whole face, was nothing more than blood, and bone fragments mixed with teeth, and an eye that was shrinking as the fluid leaked from it.

“Go! Get out of here” John yelled at Jack. They had been staring in horror, paralyzed as it all transpired. Reality never never set into them until Burch lay on the ground, looking at them with tears streaming down his bloody cheeks, still grasping where his lower jaw had once been. Death slowly creeping upon him as the blood pulsed from his arteries.

“Move it, Get the fuck outa here!” He yelled again, grabbing Jacks sleeve, pulling him with. Forgetting the Iraqi driver as they ran down a side street.

(To Be Continued…)

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  1. Hi, Lance. I read the first two chapters, but they’re not my genre. It’s good that you can bring your combat experience to your writing. I think that should offer a unique perspective as a writer as you continue.

    At first I didn’t know there was a third and fourth chapter. I’ll email you a screenshot that will explain why.

    • ok, i should have made it easy to spot, it was happening on all three of our computers, so it was not just based on the font. hope this helps

  2. Yes, they’re all clearly visible now.

    • good. I didnt want it confusing. I thank you for pointing that out to me.

      I started reading your book today. I should be done in the next few days. I read it during my “Lunch” at work. I have graveyard shift this week, so I read it for 30 minutes at a time at 2am… man life is tough sometimes.
      I will write up a review for you soon.
      Expect an email, well probably before you read this, you have read it…

      Talk soon,
      Lance

      • good. I didnt want it confusing. I thank you for pointing that out to me.

        You’re welcome.

        It’s a pretty big compliment to know you’re using up your 30 minutes to read my book. Thank you! 🙂

        A merciless Amazon review filled with brutality would be appreciated. 🙂 Thanks.

        I got your email, I’ll reply to that now.

      • Lance, I’m sorry that I worded my reply so poorly and thoughtlessly. Any review you wanted to share with me—whether it’s on Amazon, your blog, or by private email—would be welcome and appreciated. And whether or not you give me feedback, I do hope you enjoyed some of it. If you ever want to discuss anything else, please drop me a line. I was wondering about that last project you mentioned to me, if it was going well for you. Take it easy…

  3. No worries man. I didn’t think it was thoughtless at all. Quite the contrary. I got really busy at work a couple months ago, and hadn’t read anything at all. I had dropped all books I was reading, as I was either too tired, or sleeping when I had any time off. Now I am jobless and trying to finish all the things I started. My painting, working on my novel, not to mention finishing the 5 books I was reading. Yours as well.
    It’s will write a review, and will let you know what I think. I had finished the story about the children, and thought it was a brilliant story. I could see it, or something based off of it, on the big screen.
    Just give me time.
    You can see I have not even written in my blog for quite some time either. That is how bad it had become.
    The last project got canned as fast as I thought of it. Part of it I am going to do myself. The Harley Quinn journals from Arkham Asylum, which will delve into her slow mental fall into villainy with the Joker. I think it could be awesome still.
    Otherwise, I hope all is well with you.
    Peace brother.
    Lance

  4. Thanks, Lance. I hope everything falls back into place for you soon. No pressure on finishing the book, take all the time you need. And THANKS for the nice compliment on that story!

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